Maybe not dance.. but quite nice melodies and sounds. The kick isn't so good, it gets under the other elements.. This track needs more energy, I think. Well, what can I say, pretty good track. :)

i dont like trance or dance but this is pretty good song:) sorry my bad english:) Jepulis!

I don't like the drums. Too weak kick and too basic hats. Nice melodies. Still you could improve sounds and do lead melody to this.

Well, i don't know if this belongs to dance genre but it's a good song anyway. It's very calm and peaceful, nice strings =). This might work in clubs, no question about it. Keep up the good work.

hmm... starts pretty well, but those high string sounds are not so good, maybe those should be at little lower volume. Melody is rather good, but it just not seems to grow any bigger (i mean it doesn't start well at anytime, that it would have given a "chorus" felling, like where you can hear all the melodies at the same time, so more melodies in the track :) Drums are ok, but some sounds should be stronger, like kick-drum. Hihats playing there pretty well, good lines. Percussions also sound good. There could be more effects on clap-sound, so it would sound more powerful. I think the whole song is constructed pretty well, in some places you can hear only a few sounds and melodies, and in some places there's good going. All in all this is a good song, but there's something which should be in this song, that it would have taken the listener away :) but anyway, good job! (sorry if there's some sentences weirdly written, This is my first english comment in here)