Because of bad mixing your singing voice sounds a bit faar away or canned. It's really hard to judge this in a fair way because you can barely hear anything:/
You also have problems with keeping the tune in some parts of the song but I think u have the potential if you would work with someone who would teach you how to really make the most out of your voice! Maybe it's just that the song doesn't really fit you? More practising and a better sound!

Good luck!

Love//Siri